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The man of Ice by ~SilverQuill:iconSilverQuill:

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the man of ice is hollow
his skin cold as the grave
his armor made of solid snow
his blade is forged of ice
his hair is frozen rain
streaming down his face
his eyes are flakes of winter snow
captured in their fall

he mustn’t come too close to warmth
and thaw his icy shield
or be proven wrong
the man of ice is hollow
hollow, after all
©2006-2009 ~SilverQuill
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Author's Comments

This is about a certain silver/grey haired guy and could be considered fan poetry. But does that even exist...?
Anywaym it's got lots and lots of meaning, especially in the last... thingy... er... *hits self* Yes, paragraph. The last couple of lines are kind of subtle, I don't expect you to understand really ^^; But I won't explain here, just read the thing first, ok? Ok.

Vicious belongs to whoever made him and Cowboy Bebop

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~Godsprincess23 Jan 18, 2006, 12:12:09 PM
Very Good work, you do exllent work. I like it. I enjoyed reading it. :Hug: =)

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May god bless you

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~Eltharion Jan 18, 2006, 12:21:40 PM
And I still love him to bits *clings to Vicious*

I love this poem... it has such a lovely flow.

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"Is it because it's finite, that people cling to the joys of life?" ~Siegfried Schtauffen

"In this world there's nothing to believe in..." ~Vicious

"Life can be hard, even cruel. But it's life" ~Auron
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~SilverQuill Jan 18, 2006, 12:40:07 PM
Thank you ^^

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Chaotic by Nature
"I want to return there... One more time. I want to be as close as I can." -Gren
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~SilverQuill Jan 18, 2006, 12:42:14 PM
I wrote half of it in english class XD Hmyeah. I tried not to be negative about him, did it work...? ^;

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Chaotic by Nature
"I want to return there... One more time. I want to be as close as I can." -Gren
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~Eltharion Jan 18, 2006, 1:03:32 PM
oh my XD yes it did work... though... you make it sound like Vicious is a bottom less pit without emotions... *sniffles*

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"Is it because it's finite, that people cling to the joys of life?" ~Siegfried Schtauffen

"In this world there's nothing to believe in..." ~Vicious

"Life can be hard, even cruel. But it's life" ~Auron
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~Godsprincess23 Jan 18, 2006, 1:19:42 PM
You're welcome. What inspires you to write so good? =)

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May god bless you

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Please click on my eggs it need ur clickz
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~SilverQuill Jan 18, 2006, 2:23:06 PM
So good...? *blushes* Erm... Well, this was sort of based on character in a series.

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Chaotic by Nature
"I want to return there... One more time. I want to be as close as I can." -Gren
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~SilverQuill Jan 18, 2006, 2:26:44 PM
Nononono, you missed the deeper meaning! Like I expected to happen ^^; He's only trying to make it look that way, but if he'd let the ice melt, it would become obvious it actually isn't. *nods*

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Chaotic by Nature
"I want to return there... One more time. I want to be as close as I can." -Gren
:iconeltharion:
~Eltharion Jan 18, 2006, 2:42:41 PM
I know ;) but vicious would rather die than let that happen *sighs* I love him so much <3 I can relate to him... ok that's freaky... must not channel Vicious...

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"Is it because it's finite, that people cling to the joys of life?" ~Siegfried Schtauffen

"In this world there's nothing to believe in..." ~Vicious

"Life can be hard, even cruel. But it's life" ~Auron
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~RavenCloud Jan 18, 2006, 5:59:38 PM
Very nice. And so I no longer feel alone in the world when I write poetry inspired by characters. I did one about Kurama a long time ago, but it never made it up, cuz it's not Dev worthy.

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Who the hell can believe you
I don't ((take)) it anymore
What can I do?
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